Don Quixote

with its army of Sugar-Hyped Zombies (from Hell) the Coffee cup sweeps in world Domination. an ordinary Brew? i wish that were true... All Hail the Starbucks Mocha Frappuccino! the ...

I like the way this rhymes very rhythmically without sounding cheesy. A very vivid portrait of the end times. It may have been more effective to find some way to ...

Nice work... It was a little confusing for me, but only in so much as it made me want to read closer and decipher the meaning. I think some of ...

Residing in an empty socket, An endless sphere of incandescent light, Floating… drifting in a sea of placid milky white. The window to a twisted world… a personal kaleidoscope. Only ...

First, a few technical errors. I noticed that a couple of times you used the words "nothings" and "somethings". You should either write that "nothing is" or "something is" or ...

The the skeleton swings From the gnarled tree Black against the moonlight Swinging from it's twisted gallows Creaking as the chill winds blow Groaning as in living pain Suffering years ...

I like the basic idea of what you're doing here and parts of it are very well written, but there are some things I would change. You basically run through ...

Well put! I just recently read a short story by Joyce Carol Oates called, "Why Don't You Come Live With Me it's Time." This is a story about an insomniac. ...

Good people of planet earth! My printer, the very printer that sits by my computer day after day, the printer that has printed every document that I have ever written ...

Very amusing. I especially liked the fact that you called him "Big G" after he became a gangster. That was pure genius. However, it would seem more like a newspaper ...

...a pair of stilts. After strapping the stilts to his legs, his previously puny one-foot height was transformed into a towering seven feet! This also increased his stride, allowing him ...

Hey, I know what you mean about the word "ravaging". After I thought about it for a bit, I realized that it's not even really what I want to say. ...

We stood by each other In a changing time of life. Together, We gave truth our all. Then in a world of dangers And enticing distractions, I helplessly watched you ...

Nice story! Could you make the ghost lady be a little more obviously "ghosty" in the scene at the beginning? I mean, it's really good, but I just didn't even ...

I dig it... to a degree. I like the fact that a lot of people can relate to the emotions you are portraying here. Judging by the fact that he ...